tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post4538663649894597151..comments2023-06-11T20:40:30.199-04:00Comments on Here there be dragons...: Flash Fiction #3 - What if?Lauren Cude Horsfallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15713938333921978342noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-90461173075776890922009-09-08T10:06:26.476-04:002009-09-08T10:06:26.476-04:00Liked the build-up of this. The idea of crayons th...Liked the build-up of this. The idea of crayons that make things real is a great one.dan powellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131553102349479513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-91364633357906231062009-09-07T12:40:17.092-04:002009-09-07T12:40:17.092-04:00Uh, never mind the crayons, I want the address of ...Uh, never mind the crayons, I want the address of that little old lady. She might have some other tricks up her sleeve!<br /><br />Cute story. Good job on the editing -- that can be rough, but you did an excellent job.<br /><br />:)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05660181882760446931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-46426801405119407542009-09-07T06:37:07.979-04:002009-09-07T06:37:07.979-04:00I liked that a lot. You described reality for the ...I liked that a lot. You described reality for the narrator perfectly, and knitted the surreal bits in seamlessly (well, they would be seamless if they were knitted, but you know what I mean).<br />Why did the woman give the narrator the crayons?<br />And can I join the queue to borrow them please?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-63322232033650724302009-09-05T18:05:53.145-04:002009-09-05T18:05:53.145-04:00I want some crayons!!- Fun stuff.I want some crayons!!- Fun stuff.Michael Solenderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01120045114297450520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-91239938684401594062009-09-05T13:56:06.339-04:002009-09-05T13:56:06.339-04:00Thanks for posting another story for #fridayflash....Thanks for posting another story for #fridayflash.<br /><br />Nice story. I am amazed you managed to cut nearly 4000 words. Impressive.<br /><br />Too bad the spell was broken. But, if the cat is still there...<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/tiki-view_blog.php?blogId=1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-92173628321142678702009-09-05T11:37:33.726-04:002009-09-05T11:37:33.726-04:00The exact same thing happened to me the other day....The exact same thing happened to me the other day. Regretably, I'm such a horrible artist that the tree died, the pot of gold was a bucket of apples, the cat turned out to be an ill-tempered goat and I didn't get a rainbow, just rain......<br /><br />Good story. Keep 'em comingChris Kerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17125291036421761671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-8674505757138832412009-09-05T11:21:24.302-04:002009-09-05T11:21:24.302-04:00What a pleasant story! Went wonderfully with my mo...What a pleasant story! Went wonderfully with my morning coffee and now I'm eyeing my daughter's crayons with new hope. Thanks for brightening my morning :)CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-87013297428398575792009-09-04T23:25:15.417-04:002009-09-04T23:25:15.417-04:00Lots of crayons to go around! Just have to convin...Lots of crayons to go around! Just have to convince the cat to tell you where he hid them!Lauren Cude Horsfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15713938333921978342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-47592191017935006512009-09-04T23:10:55.834-04:002009-09-04T23:10:55.834-04:00Don't hog the crayons, yall. Pass 'em!
~2Don't hog the crayons, yall. Pass 'em!<br />~2Tomara Armstronghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185889402088565686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-20929249379885619662009-09-04T22:09:39.047-04:002009-09-04T22:09:39.047-04:00I call next on the crayons! Now, how to draw a ma...I call next on the crayons! Now, how to draw a mansion by the sea with wood paneled library.Chris Chartrandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09766438158698041660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824113650836829685.post-76087618969504569732009-09-04T21:48:27.121-04:002009-09-04T21:48:27.121-04:00Nice story! Can I borrow your box of crayons? Ple...Nice story! Can I borrow your box of crayons? Please???Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.com